Dream away

The only thing I can "critique" is just a note for the future that you (and probably me too since I took a similar shoot) need to be very careful with the angles. With this angle her chin isn't very well defined, in part perhaps because of the fit of the clothing and how they reacted to her position, and gives the impression that she's bigger than she is. She has very nice bone structure and we want to highlight it, not flatten it

But I like the texture giving a dotted effect over her, like little dancing lights lol